Hey everyone...Got a second? Check out my new blog for the store, here. I am getting ready to launch it anyday now, but I could use a few more sets of eyes. Any typos? Weird links? Something look funny? Or is it...PERFECTION.
I'd appreciate any feedback! Thanks!
2 comments:
Great job, Leah! It was fun to poke around the site and check out some of the brands we don’t carry at Spoiled Rotten.
Suggestions:
In the Photo Album section -
Jottum Fall 07 link:
1. “ever magical” --> “ever-magical”
New! Fall Fashion for Girls link:
1. “First deliveries include...” --> “First deliveries feature...” (Only because “including” is used later on in the same sentence.)
2. “...as well as a Tea...” --> “...as well as Tea...”
Pura Vida Fall 07 link:
1. Replace semi-colons in last sentence with commas.
In the About Me section -
1. “...big on kid’s fashion...” --> “...big on kids’ fashion...” or “...big on children’s fashion...”
2. “Petite Bateau” --> “Petit Bateau” (this should be changed on the site wherever P.B. is used”
3. “Petunia Picklebottom” --> “Petunia Pickle Bottom” (this should be changed on the site wherever PPB is used”
4. I know this isn’t out there for all to see yet but if it is almost ready, be sure to put something in the “Interests” section of the page or remove the title
Other things to note-
1. Links to brands on left side of the blog all appear to be working as intended. (Whew!)
2. When you click on “Archives” on the right side of the page, it brings up the same list in the middle of the page with Categories underneath it. The “Categories” heading on the right wasn’t made into a link. I’m not sure if the link is needed, although having it collapsible once the blog is up and running might be a good idea.
Hey! You changed it today. I like the look of the links better now (than before).
Yeah, other than that - it looks great!
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